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Rashmika Mandanna
... that Rashmika Mandanna made her debut in 2016 opposite Rakshit Shetty in the Kannada romance Kirik Party?- Reviewed:
19Arham ( talk) 21:24, 17 May 2024 (UTC).
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A new hook is needed here as the hook may not be interesting or understandable to a broad audience, particularly if the reader is unfamiliar with Shetty.
Narutolovehinata5 (
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- @ 19Arham: Can you suggest some additional hooks below? Z1720 ( talk) 02:10, 27 May 2024 (UTC)
ALT1: ... that Rashmika Mandanna starred in the third highest-grossing Indian film of 2023 opposite Bollywood royalty, Ranbir Kapoor?
- That doesn't seem to be much of an improvement, not to mention referring to Kapoor as "Bollywood royalty" could fall afoul of
WP:WTA.
Narutolovehinata5 (
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19Arham: are there any other aspects of this article that could be a good hook? Proposing multiple hooks is more likely to get approved. @
Narutolovehinata5: do you have any suggestions of interesting aspects in which to get a hook from?
Z1720 (
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- I'm not an expert on Bollywood so I'm probably not the best person to ask about this; besides, I didn't get much ideas from a quick skim of the article, but it could just be due to unfamiliarity with the subject.
Launchballer has experience proposing ALTs for entertainers so maybe they'd have some ideas.
Narutolovehinata5 (
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- ALT2: ... that Rashmika Mandanna was reluctant to accept her first Hindi cinema role as she disagreed with her character's views on spirituality? jumps out, although there may be others. Also @ 19Arham: I strongly recommend submitting an image with this nomination, as all of the images are Creative Commons.-- Laun chba ller 20:23, 11 June 2024 (UTC)
- I'm not an expert on Bollywood so I'm probably not the best person to ask about this; besides, I didn't get much ideas from a quick skim of the article, but it could just be due to unfamiliarity with the subject.
Launchballer has experience proposing ALTs for entertainers so maybe they'd have some ideas.
Narutolovehinata5 (
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- @
19Arham: are there any other aspects of this article that could be a good hook? Proposing multiple hooks is more likely to get approved. @
Narutolovehinata5: do you have any suggestions of interesting aspects in which to get a hook from?
Z1720 (
talk) 00:59, 10 June 2024 (UTC)
- That doesn't seem to be much of an improvement, not to mention referring to Kapoor as "Bollywood royalty" could fall afoul of
WP:WTA.
Narutolovehinata5 (
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ALT2 sounds good and can be reviewed, though if anyone has additional hook suggestions that's also appreciated.
Narutolovehinata5 (
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