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Mitch Ames ( talk) 14:02, 17 June 2014 (UTC)
Has Freopedia stopped using QRpedia ? Victuallers ( talk) 16:04, 19 June 2014 (UTC)
The article currently says:
The Fremantle Society, ... have had to deal with:
- ...
- Proposed demolition or removal of Fremantle Markets
- Proposed widening of High Street, and demolition of numerous buildings
Note the use of past tense and unconditional "have had to" and the conditional implied future tense "proposed". How have these entities had to deal with proposed changes to Markets, High St, buildings in the context of tours and trails? Did they have to create draft documentation with new tours and trails as part of the proposals? Did those proposals ever eventuate?
What impact did the actual loss of the Oriana Cinema have on the walking tours and trails? Was there a trail that changed or was removed as a consequence of that loss?
Mitch Ames ( talk) 12:24, 4 May 2024 (UTC)
Regarding this deletion of text:
I suspect that some of the deleted text should probably be kept, eg
The City of Fremantle has had "heritage events" which have included special tours and walks .... [1]
References
- ^ Bosworth, Michal; Walker, Meredith; Hutchison, D. E. (David Eric), 1927-; Pike, Penelope; Fremantle (W.A. : Municipality). Council; Fremantle Heritage Asset Management and Data Base Project (1995), City of Fremantle thematic historical framework, The Council, retrieved 15 June 2014
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would appear to be relevant here. I don't have access to the reference though, so I can't check the validity of that text. Mitch Ames ( talk) 05:03, 5 May 2024 (UTC)
The article currently says:
The walking through or around Fremantle ... had involved competitions in 1893. [1]
References
- ^ "PEDESTRIANISM". The Inquirer & Commercial News. Perth, WA. 17 March 1893. p. 16. Retrieved 15 June 2014 – via National Library of Australia.
but that reference says (with my emphasis here) "A handicap walking match will be held ... in the Town Hall". Is there a "walking tour or trail" in the Town Hall? I can't see how this competition falls within the scope of the article "Fremantle walking tours and trails". Mitch Ames ( talk) 12:20, 4 May 2024 (UTC)