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The result was: promoted by
RoySmith (
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14:22, 3 November 2022 (UTC)
Created by Alin2808 ( talk). Nominated by LordPeterII ( talk) at 20:42, 28 October 2022 (UTC).
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Going to AGF since I don't understand Romanian.
Onegreatjoke (
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13:27, 31 October 2022 (UTC)
The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.
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Reviewer: Oxi2514 ( talk · contribs) 22:03, 4 November 2022 (UTC)
Hey, il be reviewing this article as soon as I can. This is my first GA review so please bear with me, and I apologize in advance if any of my findings are incorrect. Plan to get a decent amount of the review done in the coming days however will have it done by next weekend at the most. Oxi ( talk|he/him)
Aegis Ashore shares components of the ship-based version including the AN/SPY-1 radar, Command, Control, and Communication systems, Computers and Intelligence (C4I) systems, Mk 41 Vertical Launch Systems, computer processors, display systems, power supplies, and Raytheon SM-3 interceptor missile variants. The Deveselu site has been upgraded to use the SM-3 Block IB interceptor. The SM-3 Block IB has additional capabilities compared to prior SM-3 versions in identifying and tracking objects during flight.
This paragraph almost directly matches a paragraph found in Source
[1], I would suggest rewording it.
The same launchers can be used to fire a range of surface-to-air missiles as well as Tomahawk cruise missiles and other offensive weapons,
I would recommend rewording this sentence found near the bottom of the first capabilities paragraph as it directly matches
[2]
Little thing I found, was reading through Source [3] and I noticed it mentions a Colonel Veronel Vavura who served before Razvan Bratulescu. You may want to mention him in the "Past Commanders" infobox section
Will be checking 5 random sources later to make sure there's no original research
Just want to check, is roaf.ro the official Romanian Air Force website? [4]
I have concluded my review. Excellent job with this article, it meets all 6 criteria and all of my suggestions and issues have been addressed well. I'm happy to say that this article has
Passed. Congratulations. :)
Oxi (
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10:11, 6 November 2022 (UTC)