Good idea, done. Also, after working on this article recently, I'd like to point out that it is still in need of major work. A peer review at this stage is very premature in my opinion. Gary King (
talk)01:09, 27 January 2009 (UTC)reply
"Metroid is a video game series published by Nintendo and originally created by the R&D1 development team." - the R&D1 dev team is a complete mystery to readers unfamiliar with Metroid -> "originally created by Nintendo's R&D1 development team."
"on August 6, 1986, which was later released" - I think this a bit better -> "on August 6, 1986, and was later released"
"consists of ten video games, comics and manga adaptations, and video game soundtracks released on audio CDs." - You mean there are ten video games, ten comic and manga adaptations, and ten soundtracks?
"including the eponymous Metroids." - I've played almost all the Metroid games, the pirates pursue the metroids almost exclusively -> "particularly the eponymous Metroids."
"The series' gameplay contains elements from shooter, platforming, and adventure games, and the series is notable for its non-linear" - "Series" and then "series" again -> "The series' gameplay contains elements from shooter, platforming, and adventure games, and is notable for its non-linear"
But there is also two "ands" then, "and adventure games, and" - you might want to fix that.
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"by connecting Metroid Fusion to Metroid Prime," - How do you connect two game together?
Shouldn't the games be listed by release date? The metroid prime games are listed separate from the rest.
"The PAL, Japanese and Player's Choice versions are different" - Different how?
"Set between Metroid Prime and Echoes" - I cant decide if this is trivial or not.
"First game in the series to have downloadable content." - Is there really downloadable content? I know the source says so, but I have the game and do not recall anything extra being available via a download. Consider this, downloadable content and a Wii channel are different. If downloadable content refers to the Wii Channel, I believe it is misleading and should be reworded or removed.
"Two-CD set, one with the soundtrack of each game." - poor language, try "Two-CD set; each disc contains soundtrack" or something similar.
"Consisted of three short stories across that issue, themed after but not directly adapting the game" - I believe this is better, "Consists of three short stories across one issue, themed after, but not directly adapting the game" or something similar.
What is up with references 35 and 36? No publishing or author information.
"in North America and in PAL regions" Not necessary in these constructions.
"It is notable for its non-linear progression and solitary exploration." I am not sure if this is why it is nitable. Maybe "A unique (important) features is its..."
Check overlinking of game consoles in the media list.
Refs 35 to 37 need notices that they are in Japanese.