After it's premotion to GA, I am now trying to get the article to FA status. Masem already gave me some tips but I want a bit more feed back.
KingRock(Gears of War)
18:10, 10 July 2008 (UTC)reply
Ok, let's begin;
The fair use rationale on the gameplay image needs to be clearer; what does it demonstrate, and why is it needed? Be very specific. Done
Gameplay needs 3-4 more citations
Promotion and release can probably be combined into one section Done
The statement that four of the songs are covers should be referenced
Reception needs expansion; sales figures? Add a few more reception sentences, talking about the games strengths and weaknesses Done
wikilink the publishers in the references, like USA today, and others Done
You may want to add an image of the actual gameplay, where the notes are coming at you. Done
finally, copyedit it a lot, especially the development section which seems disjointed.
Just an opinion in the gameplay section. It might be good if the gameplay section is divided into multiple sections with different game modes, how to play, etc. Just thought that might be good.
Kagemasta (
talk)
08:22, 8 February 2012 (UTC)reply