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comments You've done everything right, i.e. sources look good, prose is grammatically correct. In order for the prose to be considered "brilliant and engaging" for a .25 mile route, you're going to have to focus more on the details that an article on, say, a 200 mile route would. Suggestions to expand:
Just my $.02 Dave ( talk) 19:39, 20 September 2008 (UTC) reply