I've been working on this article for a while now and am looking for feedback. I'm hoping to get this to FA status, what do you think?
jwillbur 23:58, 18 April 2008 (UTC)reply
I will be posting a more detailed review of this later, but great job so far. I came across this article last month and added it to the featured bio list of
Portal:ACW, I really like it.
MrPrada (
talk) 00:26, 19 April 2008 (UTC)reply
Kirill Lokshin
Very nice, overall; a few suggestions, though:
The MoH citation might be better off integrated into the ACW section (perhaps as a pullquote or something of that sort).
It'd be nice if the see also links could be worked into the text somehow.
The lead should be expanded if possible.
Keep up the good work!
Kirill 13:53, 28 April 2008 (UTC)reply
Ryan4314
Two minor minor suggestions regarding the lead;
Just a thought, what do you think about moving the "During the
American Civil War" bit up? So it looks something like this;