This is the biography of the leading
Chad rebel commander. I want to ask a review of this article so to see how far it is from a potential A-class category, and what is most necessary to be done. The great lack, as all may notice, is the lack of images; there's little I can do, unfortunately, as free images of prominent Chadians are in general extremely rare (there's only one in wikipedia, and it's that of the current President of the country).--
Aldux (
talk)
18:46, 26 March 2008 (UTC)reply
Kirill Lokshin
Quite nice, overall. A few minor suggestions:
There's a lot of redlinks in the article; any chance of getting some of the more prominent ones stubbed out?
Are there images available of any of the events, particularly in the civil war? Maps could potentially work here, if nothing else can be found.
Should there be succession boxes for his political posts, or are they all single-holder things?
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javascript program:
Per
Wikipedia:Context and
Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates), months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Single years without accompanying dates, decades, and centuries should only be linked if they provide
context for the article.[?]
Please consider adding {{persondata|PLEASE SEE [[WP:PDATA]]!}} along with the required parameters to the article - see
Wikipedia:Persondata for more information.[?]
There are a few occurrences of
weasel words in this article—please observe
WP:AWT. Certain phrases should specify exactly who supports, considers, believes, etc., such a view.
was considered
might be weasel words, and should be provided with proper
citations.[?]