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I am nominating this article for A-Class review because I believe it is close to A class and I am eventually hoping it will reach Featured Article class. Any suggestion for improvement welcome. Kevin Murray ( talk) 14:49, 25 September 2010 (UTC) reply
Above all thank you so much for taking the time to help me here and leave this excellent advice. Cheers! -- Kevin Murray ( talk) 19:33, 27 September 2010 (UTC) reply
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Oppose per usual disclaimer. I don't disagree with the many positive things said above, and I'm sure we can massage this into an A-class article in time. Here's a list of some of the remaining problems. Other good sources of information on what we're looking for are in previous A-class reviews and edit summaries.
'Discussion of pre-dreadnought section'
Dank has made some very good points, all of which have been addressed, except several having to do with one pivitol paragraph, which was added after the article reache GA status, much of which was taken out of the lead, which seemed to be bogged in detail. Dank's comments are restated here for clarity: --
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