This has failed a couple of FACs so I thought I would get a new set of eyes on this.-- TonyTheTiger ( t/ c/ bio/ WP:CHICAGO/ WP:LOTM) 23:30, 9 December 2008 (UTC) reply
Comments First, I don't understand why there are two infoboxes. Also, the references section at the bottom should be formatted correctly. Other than that, looks good. Cheers, ṜedMarkViolinist Drop me a line 19:17, 18 December 2008 (UTC) reply
between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of 000 Yard, use 000 Yard, which when you are editing the page, should look like: 000 Yard.
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Other than those everything looks good. §hep • ¡Talk to me! 06:05, 21 December 2008 (UTC) reply
However, those were the only problems I could find, so please fix them and the ones mentioned above and it'll look good. – Joe Nu tter 21:09, 20 December 2008 (UTC) reply
Tentative support as long as the image remains hidden. Oppose, Comment Not supporting yet, there are a few issues for me.
*"All-American American football player" reads weirdly for me, he is an All-American American...