I am requesting this article be reviewed for A-class as I believe it meets the criteria. However, I have never done this before. I am willing to make further improvements when and if necessary. Any and all comments welcome. Hawkeye7 ( talk) 10:38, 24 September 2008 (UTC) reply
Comment - the lead needs to be expanded. The purpose of the lead is to act as a short summary of the actual article, and should be around three paragraphs in length for an article of this size. Abraham, B.S. ( talk) 11:32, 24 September 2008 (UTC) reply
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between a number and the unit of measurement.Cheers, ṜέđṃάяķvюĨїήīṣŢ Drop me a line 16:31, 24 September 2008 (UTC) reply
Comment Just had a quick glance, not knowing where the Admiralty Islands are, I was quite supprised to see it was a WWII campaign.
thats all for now will return later Jim Sweeney ( talk) 11:23, 25 September 2008 (UTC) reply
Support I would like to see an OOB or a link but that does not stop my support Jim Sweeney ( talk) 09:58, 28 September 2008 (UTC) reply
Besides these two and a minor copy edit I did it looks like it ready to consider an FA nomination Gnan garra 14:23, 29 September 2008 (UTC) reply
Those issues and those brought by other contributors need to be fixed before I can support this for A-class. Joe ( Talk) 20:00, 5 October 2008 (UTC) All my objections except the spelling have been dealt with, supporting. Joe ( Talk) 00:12, 6 October 2008 (UTC) reply