I am trying to figure out what else could be done to make this become a Good Article. I don't know if this article has what it takes to become a Featured Article just yet but if you want to review it like one, go ahead. I think this might get there with some help.
GamerPro6403:10, 15 March 2021 (UTC)reply
Comments by Z1720
Hi, I've taken a quick scan through the article and here are some comments:
"intended to have a black-centric film" Is this supposed to say, "intended to be a black-centric film"?
"negative reviews from critics. Despite negative reception," Can you rephrase to remove negative? Suggestion: "The film was a commercial success but received negative reviews from critics while the heavy metal soundtrack received praise."
The Reception section has a lot of "X said this" or "In Y, X said this" formatting. Are there common themes from the critics that you can combine together?
The "Mystery Science Theater 3000" talks a lot about the movie's release and its reception on the show. I wonder if it should be a Level 3 heading inside Release instead?
I found some additional sources from
Variety you could use in the article:
Film review: Zombia Nightmare Variety (Archive: 1905-2000); Los Angeles Vol. 329, Iss. 4, (Nov 18, 1987): 14. - Found on ProQuest.
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Variety (Archive: 1905-2000); Los Angeles Vol. 329, Iss. 13, (Jan 20, 1988): 28, 69, 72-73, 90. - Found on ProQuest. This verifies its MPAA rating and US release date.
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