I've listed this article for peer review because I have plans to nominate it to FA in the future. I know it requires a copy-edit so I requested one some days ago. Still, I'm not sure what it lacks to become a FA like
Allen Walker so I would like suggestions, critcism, etc.
Complete the "Media data and Non-free use rationale" table for the infobox image. Same goes for the screenshot in the "Appearances" section.
Aoba47 (
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20:34, 18 March 2017 (UTC)reply
Could you further specify this sentence "Additionally, she found Kanda difficult to illustrate due to his beauty."? How does the character's beauty make him difficult to illustrate?
Aoba47 (
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20:34, 18 March 2017 (UTC)reply
Kanda is
bishonen (an androgynous male character who is even mistaken for a woman in one chapter for the manga). However, Hoshino never refers to him as a bishonen but "sex appeal". How do you think I should rephrase it.
Tintor2 (
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14:14, 28 March 2017 (UTC)reply
I think it is fine as it currently stands. I was more so asking a clarification question to see if you could possibly expand on this information. I understand if you cannot; thank you for clarifying this.
Is the screenshot really necessary? I am not sure what it adds to the article (especially since it is a non-free image).
Aoba47 (
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20:34, 18 March 2017 (UTC)reply
I do not find the image of the cosplayer to be entirely necessary for the article as it does not add much to the article and it clips through the subsections awkwardly.
Aoba47 (
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20:34, 18 March 2017 (UTC)reply
I'll remove it. Basically have no clue of what free image should I add. Maybe Willingham since he is mentioned by critics?
Tintor2 (
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14:14, 28 March 2017 (UTC)reply
No worries; I will look through the article again in the next couple of days to make more in-depth remarks. My above comments are just some minor things that I noticed while briefly reading through it. Hope it helps, and I look forward to seeing this at FAC.
Aoba47 (
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13:54, 20 March 2017 (UTC)reply
Thank you for addressing my comments. I believe that this article is strong and I look forward to seeing it put up for FAC sometime in the future.
Aoba47 (
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14:28, 28 March 2017 (UTC)reply