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Hi I'm interested in getting this to
featured list standard, but am keen not to use
WP:FLC as a peer review, so would like some feedback first before I list it.
"It continues to the stories about the characters living in Newport." -- Remove the "to"
Done
Please don't pipelink Newport, as this will give extra context and understanding to the reader
Done
Why the hyphens in "Ryan-and-Marissa and Seth-and-Summer"?
Done
Use American English on US topics. "whilst" is British English and considered archaic in the US; "while" is more commonly used
Done, thanks I didn't know that.
"documented the shows impact" -- possessive apostrophy needed
Done
"under the title of The O.C.: The Complete Second Season" -- no need for "of"
Done
"The second season is yet to be released on any iTunes Store." Why mention it, then?
Done, yes sorry, good point it. That was rather
WP:CRYSTALBALL of me as with the first season was recently released, it was there to remind me to include the second "when" it was released.
"The executive producers were creator" -- perhaps "series creator"?
Done
"written out of the show" -- "the series" is more American
Done
In the episode table, the black text is a bit hard to see against the dark blue. Could you either lighten the blue, or change the text to white?
Done, went with white.
"tension fills the air in the Cohen family is desperate to convince Seth, who ran away at the beginning of the summer, to return home." huh?