I did a copyedit of this article today, so I think I improved it some. Besides references, what should be improved in this article to bring it to good status? —
The Great Llamamoo?00:44, 27 November 2006 (UTC)reply
I think the "cameos and allusions" should be prosified. The comment about Luigi being a coward should probably include a citation to Luigi's Mansion, not sure if theres a template for video games. There are also a lot of single sentence paragraphs, some compression should allow for a better flow to the article.
Jay3218301:17, 1 December 2006 (UTC)reply