I've listed this article for peer review because I'm looking forward to nominate it eventually for Good Article status. Any feedback is welcome, as I don't really know which sections would need improvement. My english is not necessarily the best too, and some sections might still be a bit jargonny.
Thanks,
Larrayal (
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03:31, 18 June 2023 (UTC)reply
Comments from Z1720
Comments after a quick skim:
Domning, Ray & McKenna 1986" What citation is this? More information is needed.
"Mayr, G.; Goedert, J. L. (2016)" Title of the article should not be in all caps per
MOS:ALLCAPS
The lede usually does not have citations, as the information should also be in the body of the article, per
WP:CITELEDE.
Suggest looking for additional sources in
WP:LIBRARY, Google Scholar, archive.org, doaj.org and your local library system.