I've listed this article for peer review because, quite simply, I want to make this an FA. However, since I haven't gottan an article this far, I'd like to see what parts need expanding, improving, copyediting, and the like. Basically whatever's needed to make this guy an FA.
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Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at
Wikipedia:Lead. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on
WP:LEAD, and should adequately summarize the article.[?] Done
If this article is about a person, please add {{persondata|PLEASE SEE [[WP:PDATA]]!}} along with the required parameters to the article - see
Wikipedia:Persondata for more information.[?] Done
This article is a bit too short, and therefore may not be as comprehensive as
WP:WIAFA critera 1(b) is looking for. Please see if anything can be expanded upon.[?]