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I've listed this article for peer review because I would like to receive comments to improve this article, and also so this article is marked as being audited for a future featured topic nomination. GaryKing (
talk)02:21, 10 August 2008 (UTC)reply
Ref 3 needs formatting; it has an author and the publisher is
Computer and Video Games or something like that (italics?).
Ref 5 has an author too (and publisher is PC Gamer?)
"and the game is also not expected to be released for some time." - is the also necessary?
"The game did not appear at E3 2008; however, some concept art has surfaced." - the semi colon and comma make readability a bit tricy, could do with some smoothing...