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I am currently improving or rewriting this article because I have an enormous amount of energy for this. I notice that some areas need a rewrite, a few areas need a source, and of course, the Criticisms section is evidently being considered for its own article. The reason for a peer review is that I need advice on how this should be formatted. There are so many areas needing fixing that even know I know how I can fix them, I am not entirely how they should be fixed, specifically reformatted. Any help would be appreciated. Gamingforfun ³⁶⁵ 23:36, 11 February 2019 (UTC) reply

• I feel the lead could be trimmed down, with paragraph 2 trimmed down and paragraph 3 moved entirely into "History". WelpThatWorked ( talk) 16:14, 21 March 2019 (UTC) reply

Done. Gamingforfun ³⁶⁵ 07:05, 29 March 2019 (UTC) reply