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I worked on this article over a decade ago and succeeded to get it to GA status but failed at FA. Since then, I've been largely inactive on Wikipedia, and there's been no updated review of quality for this article. In getting back involved with Wikipedia, I'd really like to push this article across the finish line, but since I'm surely rusty, could use a pair of eyes on it to help me figure out the places in the article most in need of some love.
Thanks, -- Mr. Wick 09:36, 22 September 2021 (UTC)
I think I can give some imput on this. I've recently been working on articles related to Mistwalker, and did an expansion on Sakaguchi's article. There's some basic things I can suggest.
@ Mr. Wick: That's what jumped out at me in broad strokes. The general advice or perhaps trimming down the synopsis a little, and making sure the references are up to date/archived, also apply but are more general tidying than issues. -- ProtoDrake ( talk) 22:18, 28 September 2021 (UTC) @ Mr. Wick: Re-pinging in case the above didn't work. -- ProtoDrake ( talk) 23:56, 28 September 2021 (UTC)
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Mr. Wick has not edited Wikipedia since posting this PR and hasn't responded to the above comments. When they return they are welcome to incorporate the comments above into the article and open another PR. Z1720 ( talk) 22:54, 17 October 2021 (UTC)