Hi
Pkh409. I will go in and make some edits directly, then get back to you with any suggestions. Looks like
White Arabian Filly has set a high bar for me to reach. Cheers! {{u|
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Talk} 04:19, 24 February 2016 (UTC)reply
In the Outline of Ara Canal project section, in the table, change: main Canal → Main canal, for consistency and per MoS re: Title Casing and sentence casing.
Dedicated Controversy sections are deprecated. We are now instructed to weave the controversy throughout the prose of the article (where it is germane to the prose).
Suhyang should always lead with a Cap S.
In the Scenic views of Suhyang section there is no need for "
scare quotes". Erase them. All of them.
Same for the Bicycle and Ara Marina subsections: lose the "scare quotes".
Research Ara Marina to see if it should be: Ara marina.
In the Gyeongin Ara Culture Festival section, lose the single quote marks around 'Gyeongin Ara Culture Festival'
Research 'Gyeongin Ara Culture Festival' to see if it should be in Title Case or sentence case.
After this sentence: The program has changed every year and this year's program as follows. there is nothing really following it.
It is the largest shopping mall in Ara canal region. is not supported by a reference.
Since you have more than eight Notes you could invoke a column width by using the {{
Reflist|30em}} template and with the 30em column width value.
I added some Portals at the bottom of the page. If you later expand to having a See also section you could move them up there and covert them to box style by omitting the bar call out from the template.
I set the datestyle to dmy (DAY/MONTH/YEAR), so use that going forward in the prose and in references.
Change Note with: and future( → and future (
I repaired a date error in one of the Notes.
The article currently has a lot of one-line paragraphs. Expanding those would look and would flow better.
Use the {{
convert}} template to convert all metric units to standard units too. Click on the template linked here to see all the parameters you can use for conversion. Ping me if I can assist with that.