Lots of single sentences, poorly structured, although reasonably well referenced. Might be salvageable if somebody wants to take it on.
Jamesx1234513:43, 24 June 2014 (UTC)reply
There hasn't been any significant progress, so I'm delisting it. The article really needs one person to bring it together to a coherent whole, as it is there is a lot of redundant information and a large number of single sentence paragraphs.
Jamesx1234515:09, 14 July 2014 (UTC)reply