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This article contains a 5-paragraph bloated lede, numerous uncited sentences and paragraphs, and short, one sentence paragraphs in a very long "Legacy and honours" section. Z1720 ( talk) 04:17, 12 July 2024 (UTC) reply

I agree that this article has lots of deficiencies. -- Melchior2006 ( talk) 07:27, 12 July 2024 (UTC) reply

The article has seen a flurry of activity since this GAR was opened. Could you provide additional feedback following recent edits? Zsinj ^Talk 11:39, 14 July 2024 (UTC) reply

I plan to keep working on this article to address the issues raised. Other editors are active and making improvements. I welcome further feedback, review, or support at the article. Firefangledfeathers ( talk / contribs) 15:32, 15 July 2024 (UTC) reply

@ Zsinj and Firefangledfeathers: Since reviewer time is limited, please post below when the article fulfils the GA criteria and someone will conduct a more in-depth review. Z1720 ( talk) 17:08, 15 July 2024 (UTC) reply

Firefangledfeathers ( talk / contribs) 17:11, 15 July 2024 (UTC) reply