Battle of the Heligoland Bight (1939)
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22:12, 3 July 2011 (UTC).
Copy-editing needed at least: Example of syntax problems in the current article: "Leader of No. 149 Squadron, Paul Harris, later stated that this was unfair. Guthrie and Hue-Williams were untrained and had never face the enemy before. Further, Harris blamed No. 3 Group Headquarters." –> "The leader ... never faced ... Furthermore ..." — Wegesrand ( talk) 12:55, 14 June 2011 (UTC)
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