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The list was kept by
Dabomb87 16:26, 31 October 2009
[1].
- Notified:
WT:WikiProject Cricket,
WT:WikiProject Zimbabwe
I am nominating this for featured list removal because there are no FLRCs. OK, there are several issues in here that make me believe this list is no longer a FL.
Cheetah
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04:23, 7 October 2009 (UTC)
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- The page needs to be updated because there were no actual edits made since the last FLRC in February 2008.
- I think I've updated it.
The Rambling Man (
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18:50, 17 October 2009 (UTC)
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- The lead is not written well enough
- The lead should be written in chronological order to avoid sentences with "before"
- Not really, it gives useful background on what happened before Zim joined the ICC.
The Rambling Man (
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18:50, 17 October 2009 (UTC)
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- The first sentence is obvious and should be removed
- Reworded.
The Rambling Man (
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18:50, 17 October 2009 (UTC)
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- The parentheses should be avoided, especially the way they're used here.
- Parentheses seem to have disappeared.
The Rambling Man (
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18:50, 17 October 2009 (UTC)
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- In the Test match captains section
- The very first sentence is redundant
- Reworded.
The Rambling Man (
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18:50, 17 October 2009 (UTC)
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- "they are scheduled to play India in 2008" - It's the end of 2009, what happened to that game?
- Gone before I got here.
The Rambling Man (
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18:50, 17 October 2009 (UTC)
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Stuart Carlisle has a dagger next to him and the explanation in this page is very ambiguous since it gives two interpretations.
- Per notes below.
The Rambling Man (
talk)
18:50, 17 October 2009 (UTC)
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- The table has a very redundant header "Zimbabwean Test match captains" - should be removed
- Redundant headers gone.
The Rambling Man (
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18:50, 17 October 2009 (UTC)
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- The years should be changed 1992/3 → 1992/93
- Years changed.
The Rambling Man (
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18:50, 17 October 2009 (UTC)
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- The headers for all tables are redundant
- Per note above.
The Rambling Man (
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18:50, 17 October 2009 (UTC)
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How reliable is Cricket Archive? The list of contributors is 404, can't really verify
More comments may be added later.--
Cheetah
(talk)
04:23, 7 October 2009 (UTC)
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- Last comments
- I am a little confused with the "years" column of the Men's One Day International captains section. John Traicos has "1987/98" with a slash while Tatenda Taibu has "2004–2005/06" with a dash. What's the difference?
- A little bit of cricket esotericness I guess. Cricket seasons run in the summer in the Northern Hemisphere and are contained within a single year or winter in the Southern Hemispehere and span the end of one year and the beginning of the next, hence the range with the slash.... So I imagine Taibu's first test was a Northern Hemisphere test and his last was a Southern Hemisphere one...
The Rambling Man (
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12:30, 21 October 2009 (UTC)
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- Also 1.2 and 1.3 sections should not have "Men's".
--
Cheetah
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01:01, 19 October 2009 (UTC)
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- Comment from Mattinbgn
- "I am nominating this for featured list removal because there are no FLRCs" I assume this comment is an attempt at humour.
- "How reliable is Cricket Archive?" This is a topic that has been widely discussed at WP:CRICKET and in many, many cricket-related FAC discussions for articles in which it has been used. The general consensus has been that it is as reliable a source as can be found and certainly as reliable as the main alternatives,
Cricinfo and
Howstat. It has an (unsourced)
Wikipedia article giving
Philip Bailey as a general editor. In turn information on Bailey can be found
here (scroll down). The world of cricket statistics can be an area of passionate disagreement over quite esoteric points of difference but there is no dispute over the material cited here whatsover.—Preceding
unsigned comment added by
Mattinbgn (
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- Comment
- The lead sentence is iffy, and I can't really re-work it, but "men and boys" just seems like the prelude to a flowery speech.
- The dagger meaning can be simplified: it means someone who captained Zimbabwe for only part of that series. That covers one Test captaincy.
SGGH
ping!
10:18, 7 October 2009 (UTC)
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Comment - I'll see what I can do to help this list out.
The Rambling Man (
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18:01, 17 October 2009 (UTC)
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Comment - I think I've attended to the specifics above, with help from other contributors before I got here. Anything else?
The Rambling Man (
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18:50, 17 October 2009 (UTC)
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- Great job! The only remaining issue I see is the parentheses in the second paragraph of the lead. Also there is a link "India" that takes to the Pakistani team's page.--
Cheetah
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19:40, 17 October 2009 (UTC)
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- Okay, thanks. I'll get onto that tomorrow. If anyone sees anything else, don't hesitate to shout. Cheers.
The Rambling Man (
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19:43, 17 October 2009 (UTC)
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- How does it look now?
The Rambling Man (
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22:03, 17 October 2009 (UTC)
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Comments – Quite good, except for a couple minor issues I found during a reading.
Comments I'm still quite new at reviewing, but there's I guess there's only one way to learn:
- Following on from what Giants has said, why shouldn't the general sources be cited inline for their sections? This isn't an objection per se, I was just wondering why it isn't necessary?
- I think it would be potentially overkill as you would end up with the same reference possibly being used dozens of times.
The Rambling Man (
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09:11, 28 October 2009 (UTC)
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- Here's an
example of what I meant. Again, this isn't opposition, I was just wondering why it's done this way.
WFCforLife (
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12:06, 28 October 2009 (UTC)
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- Well I guess it's a matter of taste. I have seen whole tables referenced with a single reference, and I've seen individual lines all referenced with the same. Your edit is fine, but others may argue that an in-line reference like that may simply be referencing the previous sentence, not the data following. Unless there's specific guidance (that I'm not aware of), I suspect there are many ways to skin this particular cat...
The Rambling Man (
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12:57, 28 October 2009 (UTC)
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- The image caption needs a full stop.
- Perhaps a key is needed to explain the annotation for years, particularly in the ODI section. Taking Andy Flower as an example, does 1993/94–2000 mean that he was temporarily captain for a period in 1993, and then captain from 1994 until 2000? Or does it mean that he was captain from the 1993/94 season until some point in 2000? Prosper Utseya is arguably slighly more confusing.
- A ref at the end of the Streak affair sentence would probably be beneficial. The wikilink is a good source of further reading and should remain, but shouldn't be used in lieu of a reference.
- From
WP:MOSNUM, "Comparable quantities should be all spelled out or all figures: we may write either 5 cats and 32 dogs or five cats and thirty-two dogs, not five cats and 32 dogs." Therefore the opening paragraph should say "...Zimbabwe have had seven Test captains, fourteen One Day International captains and one Twenty20 captain,"
Hope that helps,
WFCforLife (
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00:28, 28 October 2009 (UTC)
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Unconditional keep, although I would be grateful for an answer to my last question for future reference.
WFCforLife (
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12:06, 28 October 2009 (UTC)
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Keep - Looks fine now.
Aaroncrick (
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09:50, 30 October 2009 (UTC)
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Keep – Good job by TRM to bring this one back to FL standard.
Giants2008 (
17–14)
20:07, 30 October 2009 (UTC)
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- The above discussion is preserved as an archive. Please do not modify it. No further edits should be made to this page.
- The following is an archived discussion of a
featured list removal nomination. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the article's talk page or in
Wikipedia talk:Featured list candidates. No further edits should be made to this page.
The list was kept by
Dabomb87 16:26, 31 October 2009
[2].
- Notified:
WP:BASEBALL,
Spangineer,
Katydidit
I am nominating this for featured list removal because it fails the
criteria. It should have been nominated when the merger occurred, but still better late than never.
- Lead
- Mostly unreferenced
The first sentence is now obsolete.
- Done.
KV5 (
Talk •
Phils)
18:33, 11 September 2009 (UTC)
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- Members of the Baseball Hall of Fame
The section title should be shortened and not to echo the title of the page
- Done.
KV5 (
Talk •
Phils)
18:28, 11 September 2009 (UTC)
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The sentence explaining the "year" column should be a footnote
- Actually, in keeping with the majority of recent baseball lists, it's been moved into the key.
KV5 (
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18:28, 11 September 2009 (UTC)
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A "key" should be before the abbreviations, not as a footnote
- done --
Muboshgu (
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16:23, 11 September 2009 (UTC)
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- The † and ‡ symbols should be clickable
- These were moved into the key.
KV5 (
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18:28, 11 September 2009 (UTC)
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- Don't you think the explanations are too long for the "key"?--
Cheetah
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01:59, 12 September 2009 (UTC)
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- Personally? Yes, I do. I didn't put them there. But I think it's pointless to make all of the daggers clickable. It would make more sense to remove the daggers, replace them with em-dashes, representing blanks, since that's truly what they are, and add a footnote.
KV5 (
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03:16, 12 September 2009 (UTC)
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- I agree that it's too long and that the daggers should be replaced and given a footnote. --
Muboshgu (
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11:42, 12 September 2009 (UTC)
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The "year" column should be centered
- done --
Muboshgu (
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18:41, 11 September 2009 (UTC)
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- The "
Name" and "Percent of vote" should be sorted properly. The names are sorted by first name; should be by last name
- done --
Muboshgu (
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17:41, 11 September 2009 (UTC)
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- The "percent of vote" is not sorting properly still.--
Cheetah
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01:59, 12 September 2009 (UTC)
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- Taking out those symbols as discussed above would take care of that problem. --
Muboshgu (
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11:42, 12 September 2009 (UTC)
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- The images need proper captions and alt texts
- Notes
- The meaning of the word "pioneer" should be sourced
- The † and ‡ notes should be sourced
- The list itself is hardly sourced. Is it sourced by an "external link"? It should be shown clearer
--
Cheetah
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05:36, 11 September 2009 (UTC)
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Conditional Keep – it's not ready to stay in its current form, but all it needs are references and a lead image, both of which I can easily provide within the two-week removal period. Compared to some older lists, this one isn't nearly that bad. I'll get to work on it forthwith.
KV5 (
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11:54, 11 September 2009 (UTC)
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- Comment I think we should make a separate column in the table that indicates whether they were elected by the BBWAA, Veterans Committee or committee on the Negro Leagues. This info is readily available.
[3] Thoughts? --
Muboshgu (
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01:03, 12 September 2009 (UTC)
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- Comment Just saw that some member are tabbed as "Executive" yet there is no "Executive" field listed in the key. Not sure if this is intentional or not, since I think the Hall groups Execs and Pioneers as kind of the same category. Just wanted to bring this up. -
Masonpatriot (
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23:13, 12 September 2009 (UTC)
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- Comment as I just said on the talk page, I think it'd be great if we added what team each player was inducted from. This information already exists at each team's page but it'd be nice to have it all centered; for example someone may want to compare how many players each team had inducted.
Redwolf24 (
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00:03, 16 September 2009 (UTC)
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- The reason that this is not included is due to the sometime arbitrary nature for which teams are selected. As the Hall, not the player, has the say over with which team a player had the most impact, and because their decisions are sometimes contentious for the players, the info isn't included. It's arguable, for some players, which team he should have been inducted with; he may have pitched 7 seasons for one team and won a lot of games and then won a World Series in two seasons with another, and thus was chosen to be inducted with the second team. Because of the possibly contentious nature of the information, I don't think it's necessary, and could cause stability issues.
KV5 (
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01:16, 16 September 2009 (UTC)
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- Heh, I wish I had seen that reply earlier, because I added teams. You can roll it back if you think it should be pulled, but I do think it's worthy of inclusion as it is the Hall's standards. --
Muboshgu (
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02:26, 16 September 2009 (UTC)
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- I believe that since most of the players are inducted as wearing a specific team on their cap, it's information that should be available in a list detailing inductees to the hall. While you can argue that Reggie Jackson should be wearing an A's cap, in the end he's in the hall with a Yankees cap, and this is indisputable.
Redwolf24 (
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11:22, 16 September 2009 (UTC)
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- Maybe it would be preferable to change it to inducted as, or something along those lines?
Redwolf24 (
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11:24, 16 September 2009 (UTC)
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- That would definitely be preferred.
KV5 (
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Phils)
11:32, 16 September 2009 (UTC)
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- Update: I've made the change.
KV5 (
Talk •
Phils)
13:57, 16 September 2009 (UTC)
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- Does anyone else feel that the positions column is too wide? This could be solved by abbreviating executive "EXEC" and pioneer "PIO" or "PNR", as is done at the
Philadelphia Baseball Wall of Fame, and also by placing those with multiple positions on multiple lines so it's not so wide (also with the "career" column). Also, I believe that the abbreviations should follow a common format, so they should all be all caps, like "1B" and "2B", resulting in "MGR" as well.
KV5 (
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13:57, 16 September 2009 (UTC)
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- Sorry, that was my bad. Next I'm going to add {{sort}} to the percentages to make them sort correctly, just as soon as I can. --
Muboshgu (
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16:26, 18 September 2009 (UTC)
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Comment – I added a couple inlines and another general reference, and plan on adding a few more cites when I get time.
Giants2008 (
17–14)
20:59, 19 September 2009 (UTC)
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Comment – Does anyone object to the multi-lining of dates to reduce the width of this table? I want to get specific line-by-line references in the table for each inductee.
KV5 (
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12:54, 22 September 2009 (UTC)
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- Comment I have removed all positions which are linked in the table (all the field positions plus Ump and Manager) because the link provides as much information as the key (per another FLC comment). Left Pioneer and Executive, as they are unlinked.
Staxringold
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contribs
21:51, 22 September 2009 (UTC)
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Comment So how do we fix the percentages? We need to take those symbols out, but then a footnote goes in? Does that mess with the sorting? --
Muboshgu (
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22:27, 26 September 2009 (UTC)
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- Shouldn't hurt the sort because all em-dashes will sort the same way.
KV5 (
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15:01, 27 September 2009 (UTC)
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- But do we insert a link for the footnotes? Would that interfere with the sort? --
Muboshgu (
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15:03, 27 September 2009 (UTC)
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- If you are using the {{
ref label}} and {{
note label}} templates, it shouldn't.
KV5 (
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15:46, 27 September 2009 (UTC)
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- Great, thanks for pointing that out. I'll read up on the use in a bit then put it to use. --
Muboshgu (
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00:08, 28 September 2009 (UTC)
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- Done. --
Muboshgu (
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02:55, 28 September 2009 (UTC)
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- Delist. I think this has got really close to keep, but basically there are still outstanding issues that have not been addressed and this page hasn't been edited in almost a week. Hopefully this !vote will be a motivating factor rather than discouragement, because lots of good work has been done previously.
Rambo's Revenge
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10:35, 4 October 2009 (UTC)
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- Update on sourcing issue for footnotes
OK, so I've considered the sourcing options. If we are indeed sourcing all of the individual rows to their HoF page (as we should), then the notes for percentage of voting do not need to be sourced. The rows source themselves. Thus, we can just put in the em-dashes in the blank cells with their footnotes and be done with that part. The second half of note 1 ("In some years, voting was done by order of preference, with one or more candidates receiving greater weight than others with the same number of votes; also, the committee would sometimes move to make a selection unanimous once the necessary number of votes was attained for a particular candidate.") is at this point unverifiable and unimportant.
KV5 (
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00:03, 6 October 2009 (UTC)
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- Sure Obviously sourcing everybody like that is the way to go, but it's tedious and will take some time on our part to finish them all. As far as the unanimous selection thing, we'll have to do something as in the case of
Lou Gehrig, and anyone else who might've been allowed in by unanimous consent, as the page doesn't specify it clearly. --
Muboshgu (
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01:03, 6 October 2009 (UTC)
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- Those inducted by special election likely will not have released percentages either; that seems to be a pattern with the HoF. If it's out of the ordinary, they don't release voting details. A pattern, unfortunately, isn't a source, because I've found one and not the other.
KV5 (
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Phils)
01:08, 6 October 2009 (UTC)
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- The Negro League Committee vote totals for 1972 were apparently released publicly, at least if you believe the
Spokane Daily Chronicle. Not sure about the other years yet.
Giants2008 (
17–14)
16:41, 6 October 2009 (UTC)
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- While I'm here, please let me know if you need help sourcing the individual players. This is the kind of work I enjoy doing.
Giants2008 (
17–14)
16:42, 6 October 2009 (UTC)
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- Please do; we'd love all the help we can get.
KV5 (
Talk •
Phils)
16:45, 6 October 2009 (UTC)
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- Your sourcing the individuals is much appreciated. I don't have the time or patience for that job right now, so thank you. --
Muboshgu (
talk)
11:49, 8 October 2009 (UTC)
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- About half the players are now individually cited. Also, I found a
book on Google News that uses the term "pioneer contributer". Would this be acceptable as a source if the key entry was shortened slightly?
Giants2008 (
17–14)
17:49, 10 October 2009 (UTC)
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- I think that's a fine source.
KV5 (
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Phils)
13:19, 14 October 2009 (UTC)
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Comment According to the link checker, there is one dead link.
Dabomb87 (
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03:35, 12 October 2009 (UTC)
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- Actually two and all fixed.—
Chris!
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04:05, 12 October 2009 (UTC)
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Resolved comments from
The Rambling Man (
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13:32, 23 October 2009 (UTC)
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Comments
- Lead image could be bigger.
- Only place its location is mentioned appears to be in the caption. Can we put this info in the opening sentence of the lead and then split the current stuff off into a second sentence?
- We have an "As of July 2009" - can this now be updated? Minor point.
- "Under the 2007 revised rules..." you've already said these are the current rules, why do we need to repeat this?
- "Over the years" whistful indeed.
- Any non-American winners? Worth noting?
- NLC key - should that be Negro League?
- Why so many unreferenced with no boxes?
- Percent of vote - isn't Percentage more generally accepted? You could even say % if you liked. And that column doesn't sort for me in Safari.
- Method of Induction, minor point but why is Induction capitalised?
- Same with "Primary Position"?
- UMP is not in the key - its not really a position is it?
- Blanks in position would be better as en-dashes.
- Be consistent with decimal places on the % - Appling is just "84%" while Foxx is "79.2%" and everyone else appears to be two d.p.s.
- Frick's range of dates - why -1951 then 1951-?
The Rambling Man (
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17:39, 17 October 2009 (UTC)
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- Made most of the changes suggested, and have comments below for the ones I didn't make:
- I made the lead image 250px. See if that works, or if it can be larger.
- Missed the Negro league capitalization one. Will go back and do it when I'm done here.
- There are no sources I can find that talk about how many non-Americans are in the Hall. From what I can tell, they aren't lumped into their own category by the American media.
- Frick: I'm guessing that's because he changed jobs in 1951, from National League president to Major League Baseball Commissioner.
- While I'm here, why not remove the note with the cite tag in it? Is an explanation really needed for why there are no figures, considering that it's all original research without a cite? This appears to be the last major obstacle to keeping this.
Giants2008 (
17–14)
02:14, 20 October 2009 (UTC)
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- Note on Negro leagues: the "Negro leagues" are correctly referred to with "league" in lower case. The Negro leagues were a collection of leagues, none of which were actually named "Negro League" (there were the Negro National League, American Negro League, etc). The committee considers careers of players from all of these leagues.
KV5 (
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02:18, 20 October 2009 (UTC)
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- decimal places still not consistent.
- % col still doesn't sort for me in my Safari browser.
- I'd like to see a note for Frick as to why his dates show -1951 and then 1951-...
The Rambling Man (
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13:32, 23 October 2009 (UTC)
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Quick note: the cite tag is gone because I removed the part of the note that was uncited as false. Several of the vote totals were released, as a look at the newspaper refs I added confirms. I'm on Internet Explorer and the sorting works for me, so I won't be of much help with sorting on Safari.
Giants2008 (
17–14)
21:33, 23 October 2009 (UTC)
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- I use IE8 and the sorting is all messed up in the % col. The "100%" and "-" cells don't sort properly. The only solution is to use the sorting templates. Giants2008, try sorting 4 times, and you'll see that it sorts differently every time.--
Cheetah
(talk)
19:42, 25 October 2009 (UTC)
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- Serves you right for using IE8! :-p
The Rambling Man (
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17:33, 26 October 2009 (UTC)
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- But seriously, I have problems with that col in Safari. So per Cheetah, it needs fixing...
The Rambling Man (
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17:34, 26 October 2009 (UTC)
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- Done.
KV5 (
Talk •
Phils)
17:44, 26 October 2009 (UTC)
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