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- General comment
- Fix the dabs, as seen in the toolbox.
- Lead
- The National Hockey League (NHL) is a professional ice hockey league composed of 30 teams, founded in 1917. | The final part of this statement should be "which was founded in 1917."
- Currently, the Florida Panthers and the Toronto Maple Leafs have no captain, and have instead named four or five alternate captains.[3][4] | I thought that teams could only select up to 3 alternative captains if they have no main captain?
- A team may also choose not to select a captain and instead select up to three alternate captains, unless a main captain does not exist. | This doesn't really help, it says that The team cannot select more than 3 if they dont choose 1 main captain, but if one doesn't exist then ..?? [it says the same thing]--<
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21:43, 14 February 2009 (UTC)
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- However, Vancouver Canucks goaltender, Roberto Luongo is the team's current captain, but two (of the three) alternate captains handle on-ice duties in his place: Willie Mitchell serves as the liaison with the officials, and Mattias Ohlund handles ceremonial aspects of the game (e.g. faceoffs). | (1)Comma after Luongo (2)Remove the comma before and Mattias Ohlund
- Toews is younger than two current captains—Sidney Crosby of the Pittsburgh Penguins, who is the youngest-ever permanent captain and Vincent Lecavalier of the Tampa Bay Lightning, who has captained the Lightning in two stints seven years apart. | Comma after permanent captain and the last part should be along the lines of "in two stints that were seven years apart."
- In 1984, Brian Bellows was named temporary captain of the Minnesota North Stars when Craig Hartsburg was injured. | If this article is about the current captains, why is this noted?
- Notes
- Toronto Maple Leafs player Mats Sundin, at the time an unrestricted free agent after the 2007–08 season did not sign a new contract, leaving the Leafs with no captain. | Comma before did not sign
- Despite goaltenders not being allowed to act as captains during the game, Roberto Luongo was named captain for the Canucks, but was not allowed to wear a C on his jersey. He incorporated it into the artwork on the front of his mask, however. | The other captains are linked in the notes, so per consistency Luongo should be linked.
- References
- Ref #1 | Rules isn't necessarily the work, the work field is if the publisher is getting the published content from somewhere else, like Billboard and Nielsen.
- Ref # 7 | Joe Pelletier. is not the publisher.
- Ref # 9 | I don't know how trusted this website is or its reliability, but my Firefox malicious site report system found this site as an attack site.--<
TRUCO>
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20:46, 14 February 2009 (UTC)
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- Completed every comment, thanks. Also for the last one about the refs, it's from the team's official website, therefore reliable. Do you mean a different one?
iMatthew //
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21:25, 14 February 2009 (UTC)
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- Hmm. Either my system is retarded or I must be dreaming. Looks fixed now.--<
TRUCO>
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21:43, 14 February 2009 (UTC)
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- Okay cool. Done, thanks!
iMatthew //
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21:48, 14 February 2009 (UTC)
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- Well removing that statement doesn't help any better. There has to be a way to explain that statement to coincide with the 4/5 alt. captains that some teams have.--<
TRUCO>
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21:57, 14 February 2009 (UTC)
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- It's nothing I can think of. Suggestions?
iMatthew //
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22:30, 14 February 2009 (UTC)
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- I mean the original statement stated that if a team chooses not to have a main captain, they can have the maximum of 3 alt. captains. But the other statement said that some teams have no captain with 4/5 alt. captains, so I think something is misworded here.--<
TRUCO>
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22:45, 14 February 2009 (UTC)-
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- Still not sure what you mean here.
iMatthew //
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13:13, 19 February 2009 (UTC)
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- This statement [Each team is also permitted to select a maximum of two alternate captains who serve as the liaison to the officials when the captain is not on the ice.] contradicts this statement [Some teams in the NHL have no captain. Currently, the Florida Panthers and the Toronto Maple Leafs have no captain, and have instead named four or five alternate captains.] It needs to be explained why they have more than the "stated max of 2 alt. captains". Is that better worded?--
TRU
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00:43, 20 February 2009 (UTC)
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- All of Truco's concerns seem to have been addressed.
Maxim
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01:07, 21 February 2009 (UTC)
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- Followup comment
- The Minnesota Wild do not name a captain for the full season; rather, they rotate captains on a month-to-month basis. -- Do you mean The Minnesota Wild have not named a captain for the full season; rather, they will rotate captains on a month-to-month basis.?--
TRU
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23:31, 21 February 2009 (UTC)
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- Well that sentence needs revising because do not name is not grammatically correct. Unless you mean "did not name"?--
TRU
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23:59, 21 February 2009 (UTC)
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- How is it not grammatically correct? But no, I mean do not name.
iMatthew //
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00:15, 22 February 2009 (UTC)
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- Oh. Now I see, I was misreading that statement.--
TRU
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00:21, 22 February 2009 (UTC)
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