The article was kept 14:46, 15 March 2008.
Doesn't satisfy 1a: This article is in need of copyediting. Also, 1c is not satisfied: there are several unsourced statements. I question 1d neutrality as well. 2a: lead is not concise.
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wood 00:34, 3 February 2008 (UTC)
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Everything else looks good, but the prose is a bit rough going. Since I'm not a prose guru, I can't put a finger on it, but some of the sentences were hard to get through. SandyGeorgia ( Talk) 21:47, 12 March 2008 (UTC) reply