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I am nominating this for featured article because after a complete rewrite and edit I believe this article meets the FA Criteria. REZTER TALK ø 00:33, 12 September 2010 (UTC) reply
THe article is underdeveloped, espcially the style section which has two sentences dicussing lyrics and little on genre of music. Sentence oddities like "Including; a case in 2003 " and non-sentences like Featuring a typical heavily down-tuned guitar set-up (lead, rhythm, and bass guitars), two percussionists in addition to the primary drummer and electronics (samples and turntables). redundancies: Burger King responded to the suit with a countersuit, and in that suit pointed out that many other bands. just pointing out. Taylor had this to say. just said. Furthering his point by saying: "there are always going to be mental disorders and people who cause violence for no other reason than the fact that they're fucked up and lost." again not a proper sentence. Even though Slipknot have been linked to several cases like this, there has been no incidents in which they were proven to be liable. redundant first part. vocalist taylor appears a thousand times. we already recognise this the first time. also issues with tense switching back and forth/ Another source of controversy was the band's 2005 lawsuit against Burger King, claiming that company created the advertising based band Coq Roq to capitalize on Slipknot's image. not grammatical and hyphen. "advertising campaign designed to motivate young people to vote". there's lawsuit and then the next minute theres a campaign getting young people to vote? Throughout their career, Slipknot have continued to develop and change their image. continued redundant with throughout. Several band members have noted that wearing the masks helps keep their personal lives private, percussionist Fehn went as far as saying it was a "blessing" that they do not get recognized. new sentence, or semi-colon. Most notably; for the music video and live performances of the song "Vermilion" in 2004 and 2005 the band members wore death masks made from casts of their own faces,[74] and in 2008 prior to the release of All Hope Is Gone Slipknot released photos of the band wearing large masks, guitarist Root explained that they "represent the ego" - this sentence is an unrepentant abomination. strong oppose edit conflict. 86.141.247.236 ( talk) 01:56, 13 September 2010 (UTC) reply