Oppose Many of my original comments still stand and the prose throughout the article needs a heavy copy-edit to meet the required "professional" standard. An FA should not be riddled with simple grammatical/punctuation/spelling errors. Unfortunately, the problems in the writing go beyond these simple errors; repetition, awkward phrasing, run-on sentences, etc. mar this article.
BuddingJournalist02:19, 23 January 2008 (UTC)reply
Comment What the hell are you doing? It's clear that the problems brought up in the previous FAC discussion have not been addressed and you have overwritten the old FAC discussion, you're a moron. RezterTALK11:21, 24 January 2008 (UTC)reply
Whoa, there. Please be
civil, Rezter. The nomination has been restarted for one reason or another, but the old nom comments are still available
here, which is where Raul linked to. Besides, is the nominator allowed to oppose their own nomination? María(
habla con
migo)
13:36, 24 January 2008 (UTC)reply
I never nominated it this time. I am opposing because it's clear that the previous problems brought up have not been addressed, which certainly need to be the least of things achieved before it's re-listed as a FAC. I apologize for appearing aggressive. RezterTALK13:46, 24 January 2008 (UTC)reply
This is not a new nomination; it is the previous nomination restarted by the FA director. So, yes, you are the nominator. :) The FAC process is still ongoing, so if you wish to work on the non-addressed issues, you have time to do so. If you would rather close this FAC, you could ask for that. María(
habla con
migo)
13:51, 24 January 2008 (UTC)reply
Oppose - for the (admittedly) rather wooly reason that I do not think the article is written in the encyclopaedic tone neccessary for featured status.
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14:58, 24 January 2008 (UTC)reply
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