The article was not promoted by SandyGeorgia 16:56, 25 April 2011 [1].
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Trying again for FA. The article has only expanded a little since the FAC. The new content is primarily about new titles related to the series. ( Guyinblack25 talk 22:13, 28 March 2011 (UTC)) reply
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and Cite web. Sorry for the confusionComment. Overall the info seems good, but the organization seems rather odd to me. Basically, I take issue with the appearances section, which seems unnecessary and disruptive to flow. The video game appearances are already covered in the development history section, which also provides evolutionary information on the character, while I do not think it makes sense to discuss spin-off appearances before establishing the character and how she came into being in the first place. I'm not ready to call it a flaw just yet, but I am curious as to the logic here. Indrian ( talk) 10:34, 16 April 2011 (UTC) reply
Comments. I'll add comments here as I go through the article; it might take me several days to get through it, but I'll try to get it done by the weekend.
More as I have time. -- Mike Christie ( talk - contribs - library) 22:34, 18 April 2011 (UTC) reply
More comments.
-- Incidentally, I'm fine with you interspersing your replies in with my comments, if you'd prefer to do that -- might be a little easier to follow threads that way. Mike Christie ( talk - contribs - library) 14:30, 23 April 2011 (UTC) reply