The article was not promoted by Karanacs 13:16, 31 August 2010 [1].
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The previous nomination was closed early mostly due to procedural reasons. I believe this article meets the FA criteria by being well referenced and comprehensive. Axem Titanium ( talk) 09:25, 9 August 2010 (UTC) reply
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Otherwise sources look OK. Note also: there are several uncited statements in the article. Brianboulton ( talk) 10:41, 10 August 2010 (UTC) reply
Brianboulton ( talk) 17:26, 14 August 2010 (UTC) reply
Looking further down from the lead, things like: "By holding a button, the player character moves forward and another button causes the character to reverse direction." Can it be grammatically parallel?
I think the prose needs work. I am away Sunday to Friday. Tony (talk) 08:46, 12 August 2010 (UTC) reply