The article was not promoted by User:SandyGeorgia 00:03, 16 June 2008 [1].
I'm nominating this article for featured article because...Nominator...The members of The Halo WikiProject have put a great deal of effort into it. I am nominating on their behalf as we all feel that the article passes the Featured Article Criteria. Thank you. Black ngold29 16:44, 30 May 2008 (UTC) reply
-- Laser brain (talk) 17:46, 30 May 2008 (UTC) reply
I have not worked on the article much, but I would be willing to help you address any issues raised. Perhaps some fresh blood will be good for the article. Black ngold29 18:33, 30 May 2008 (UTC) reply
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Another comment - You've mixed using the
Template:Citation with the templates that start with Cite such as
Template:Cite journal or
Template:Cite news. They shouldn't be mixed per
WP:CITE#Citation templates.
Ealdgyth -
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13:39, 31 May 2008 (UTC)
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There's definitely others that I missed. You'll probably disagree with at least some of these - that's fine, as long as you can tell me why the words add anything to the sentence. Nousernamesleft copper, not wood 20:29, 30 May 2008 (UTC) reply
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These are a small sample of the issues. Gary King ( talk) 19:23, 1 June 2008 (UTC) reply
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Kelly hi! 23:41, 9 June 2008 (UTC) reply
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giggy ( :O) 01:32, 14 June 2008 (UTC) reply
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I would even hesitate to call this a "good" article. There is considerable room for improvement in prose, content (depth), and images. Most definitely fails multiple FACR. Lwnf360 ( talk) 07:11, 15 June 2008 (UTC) reply