The article was promoted by Karanacs 14:55, 5 May 2009 [1].
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This year is the 400th anniversary of the discovery of Lake Champlain by the eponymous European, and the 250th anniversary of several events in the French and Indian War, some of which are relevant to Fort Ticonderoga.
I'd like to believe this article is ready for FA consideration (as my first nomination was); it's been through MILHIST ACR and received additional attention since. Thanks for your time and feedback. Magic ♪piano 14:14, 15 April 2009 (UTC) reply
Noble Comments - Hm, just reading through the lead, I find some problems: "an aura of invincibility", "ill-considered", "merely" are all rather POV. "During the American Revolutionary War..." That sentence seems to be almost a run-on. "became a stop on tourist routes of the area" feels rather informal. And: "Early in the 20th century, the fort was restored by its private owners, and is now operated by a private foundation" You repeat "private" twice in this sentence. There are other similar corrections to make in the body of the article, but these are just examples. Noble Story ( talk • contributions)
— Mattisse ( Talk) 00:29, 25 April 2009 (UTC) reply
Oppose due to image concerns as follows:
Awaiting feedback. Jappalang ( talk) 02:24, 28 April 2009 (UTC) reply