The article was not promoted by Ucucha 19:41, 20 January 2012 [1].
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I am nominating this for featured article because... It meets FA criteria, plus it has also been through GA... Khanassassin ( talk) 18:08, 19 January 2012 (UTC) - BTW, I'm also The IP User -- 193.111.221.60 ( talk), who made the article a GA, and now also (hopefully) a FA... :) reply
Oppose: This nomination looks premature; the article was promoted to GA only on 17 January. FA criteria tend to be strictly enforced in the FAC review process, which among other things requires prose to be "engaging, even brilliant, and of a professional standard". I have identified issues of grammar, spelling and punctuation in the brief lead section. I can see other points requiring similar attention in the main body of the article. Here are the lead points:-
Preparation for FAC usually involves a close copyedit from an editor who has a high degree of skill with prose. At present your best bet may be to withdraw this and renominate after a period of careful preparation. Brianboulton ( talk) 21:44, 19 January 2012 (UTC) reply