The article was not promoted by Nikkimaria 14:16, 5 November 2011 [1].
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I am nominating this for featured article because of the significant additions made by myself and a second contributor during the last six months. TwoScars ( talk) 19:09, 28 October 2011 (UTC) reply
Source review - spotchecks not done. Nikkimaria ( talk) 00:30, 29 October 2011 (UTC) reply
Link check - no DAB-links, no dead external links, still several duplicate links (list can be provided if needed, mostly county and town names). GermanJoe ( talk) 12:49, 31 October 2011 (UTC) reply
Oppose - while the article had a very helpful peer review and contains a lot of valuable information, prose and structure appear not ready for FA-level. Some comments for lead and geography follow:
I appreciate the amount of work already put into article improvements, but it would probably be better to withdraw the nomination for now to allow some more work on article structure (if necessary) and a cleanup of the article's prose by an uninvolved editor (a request at the Guild of Copy Editors would be best). GermanJoe ( talk) 12:49, 31 October 2011 (UTC) reply