The article was promoted by User:SandyGeorgia 01:37, 13 June 2008 [1].
This article details a coup d’état staged by Jean-Bedel Bokassa against the government of David Dacko. Bokassa became a ruthless dictator, just like Idi Amin. Dacko regained power 13 years later, but was again overthrown in another coup. Nishkid64 ( Make articles, not wikidrama) 02:01, 1 June 2008 (UTC) reply
Oppose for now. I found a few issues.
Switching to Comments for now because I haven't given another look yet.
Gary King ( talk) 06:22, 1 June 2008 (UTC) reply
Comments by Ruhrfisch I now see my copyedits have made me the second contributor in terms of number of edits. If it is allowed, I will Support as the issues I raised have been addressed satisfactorily, I feel the prose now meets 1A and the article meets all the other criteria as well.
Ruhrfisch
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17:39, 9 June 2008 (UTC)
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As requested I did a copyedit on this article and hope that it now meets 1A (please revert if I have made or introduced errors or made things worse). I have some comments / questions based on my reading of the article.