Welcome to my discussion page.
Hi
I have copyedited the first couple of sections. Please tell me what you think.
The rest of the sections are a little US oriented still. Normally we would put them into alphabetical order rather than US and then "the rest of the world". Here, in particular, they were developed in the Netherlands and so would not warrant a "US first made them" the rest followed.
Similarly the section on "US legal questions ..." - I have retitled as Legal questions ..." and put the rest into a "United States" subsection.
The piece is pretty well written, to be honest anything would be better than what was already there!
Chaosdruid ( talk) 21:28, 28 June 2011 (UTC)