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Your article is all about what it sells. You tell us nothing in the text about the number of employees (unsourced in the infobox), turnover or profit
Crunchbase is never suitable as a ref, and some of your other refs are just quoting the company managers, or are obvious press releases, neither are independent third-party sources. For example, the ref for They also reached five million customers in 2019 is the CEO saying so, hardly an independent source
Jimfbleak -
talk to me?12:02, 10 November 2020 (UTC)reply
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Jimfbleak: Thanks very much for the feedback. I was trying to align the page to similar
Neobanks in the space (
Acorns,
Varo) but no doubt those pages need additional work too. I've made some changes to the page; included revenue and no. of staff in the infobox. I removed the Crunchbase citation and accept your point on that. Removed the 2019 reference to a one of their key products too. Added in a section for business funding with a citation. If you could let me know if you think we're moving in the right direction that would be much appreciated.
Fountainofyouth (
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19:11, 10 November 2020 (UTC)reply
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