Ciao Fabrizio, per me la tua revisione va bene, solo due punti:
1. Non possiamo inserire come alma mater Yale, almeno non da sola. Nel mondo anglossassone alma mater è dove si è conseguito il titolo undergraduate (PhB), quindi si deve obbligatoriamente indicare Università di Torino. Quello che possiamo fare, è inserirle tutte e due:
Università di Torino (PhB)
Yale University (PhD)
in molte pagine di wiki è fatto in questo modo.
2. Non toglierei il riferimento a Jonn Rawls nella parte sulla crescita economica e sviluppo sostenibile, che ti confermo è corretto (ho letto personalmente alcune cose che Beltratti ha scritto), a meno che non sia lo stesso Beltratti a non gradire questo collegamento, però dovresti farti spiegare perché non lo vuole citare.
fammi sapere
Massimo
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Lor Ho ho ho 05:59, 18 December 2014 (UTC)
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