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I have editted Environmental impact of fashion. This is the diff. I am so glad that I learned how to edit a wiki page in the process. StellaJiang333 ( talk) 05:36, 30 October 2022 (UTC)
I edited Seoul Halloween crowd crush. Here is the diff. I edited a recent news about Halloween. It is more likely to provide supportive resources to the new Wikipedia articles. Also, I feel sad about this tragedy. Hope they are ok. JayHTCVPN ( talk) 14:22, 30 October 2022 (UTC)
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I edited The Watcher (2022 TV series) article. Here is the difference: https://en.wikipedia.org/?title=The_Watcher_(2022_TV_series)&diff=prev&oldid=1118920394 I added more background information about 'The Watcher' Netflix series, such as it is based on a true story in New Jersey. I learned how to cite and edit articles in Wikipedia. Cw3956 ( talk) 18:37, 29 October 2022 (UTC)
I have edited Guzheng. This is the diff. I have played Guzheng for many years so I am happy to edit some knowledge about this instrument. I added the relationship between Guzheng music and people's Live. ~~~~ YangyangF ( talk) 07:41, 30 October 2022 (UTC)
For this week, I choose the article of distance education. I found the section of covid-19 for distance education was mainly criticizing the disadvantage that distance education bring to both instructors and students. So, I add one sentence describing the advantages I read from one journal. It is impressive to see one section barely mention the advantages side.
The link to article: Distance education
The link to diff: https://en.wikipedia.org/?title=Distance_education&type=revision&diff=1119471058&oldid=1117830191 Jessssy ( talk) 19:45, 1 November 2022 (UTC)
I edited the article Body shape this week. I added two citations in this article here. I found this article from the SuggestBot and I think this is a convenient tool to use for finding articles need improvements. Kathyljy ( talk) 07:08, 3 November 2022 (UTC)
I edit the article Livestreaming e-commerce in China this week. The diff for my change is here. This week is the second time editing the article, and I feel more skilled. I look forward to making more contributions to Wikipedia in the future. Jaynean ( talk) 08:09, 3 November 2022 (UTC)
I edit the article Consumer Economy this week. The diff for my change is https://en.wikipedia.org/?title=Consumer_economy&diff=prev&oldid=1119792396. I know how I should search for useful articles. Ruizhouruizhou ( talk) 12:27, 3 November 2022 (UTC)
I edit the article Metaverse this week. The diff for my change is https://en.wikipedia.org/?title=Metaverse&diff=prev&oldid=1119806564. In the process of searching for information about the metaverse, I learned that the current metaverse technology is still very immature. The metaverse industry will take longer to develop. Ruizhouruizhou ( talk) 14:37, 3 November 2022 (UTC)
I edited the Sexual orientation this week. I added one citation in this article and the diff is here https://en.wikipedia.org/?title=Sexual_orientation&type=revision&diff=1119949768&oldid=1117819217. I learned more about how to evaluate the good citation source and I am more familiar with editing Wikipedia. WZ2372 ( talk) 08:32, 4 November 2022 (UTC)
I have inserted a new paragraph with a citation about Charging station in North America. I concluded the current number of charging stations in the United States according to the data published by U.S. department of energy. Here is the diff. After I have finished adding and updating the section in North America, I learned how to contribute my knowledge and searching ability to help others get better understanding current progress of building charging stations in the United States. MichaelNhy ( talk) 19:22, 4 November 2022 (UTC)
I edited the Powered exoskeleton this week. I added the latest information about the product to the article and cited an article to support my point. Here is the diff: https://en.wikipedia.org/?title=Powered_exoskeleton&diff=1120071326&oldid=1115626342. I am very interested in the product introduced in this article. Because I think it will not only change the way wars are fought in the future, but it will also have an impact on the lives of ordinary people. For example, helping people with leg problems or even helping disabled people regain mobility. These are all possible uses for the product. QiweiDuan ( talk) 00:16, 5 November 2022 (UTC)
I updated the article called TikTok. I added a section under Demographics talking about Gen Z users where I cited from a source and added my own personal comment right after. Here is the diff. This article was interesting to me because of how much social media shapes our world today. I like how this week focused on plagiarism. I learned that even if you change the words, keeping the same structure of the sentence is still a form of plagiarism. Sp6796 ( talk) 00:47, 5 November 2022 (UTC)
I edited the Electronic cigarette this week, and I'v added an information I think its needed with cited. Here is the diff [1]. After read and edited to this interesting article, I've done some research on the topic of Electronic cigarette. I found that there are more and more researches beleive that the Electronic cigarette has less potential benefit related to somkers and thats interesting for me to know. Lbw119 ( talk) 07:18, 5 November 2022 (UTC)
I edited the flood this week. I added a point about people experiencing starvation in floods in the health effect section. Here is the diff [2] I found there is an information gap about the topic in Wikipedia, so I made it up based on the reference article. Also, the reference article is related to the topic of my research paper which can provide support for my views. VenusL ( talk) 11:07, 5 November 2022 (UTC)
I edited the Ticket (admission) this week.I have added more about NFT ticketing, also I have added a reference to NFT.Here is the diff [3]. This article taught me about the various forms of tickets and their features, and it also taught me that old tickets have some historical significance. Throughout the history of tickets, electronic tickets are destined to become mainstream. BL33701 ( talk) 14:50, 5 November 2022 (UTC)
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This week I edited the article Parasite (2019 film). The diff for my change is here. I reviewed how to edit on Wikipedia with cite a journal articl. Also find a useful article about my favorite movie Parasite! Yanlzhu ( talk) 02:46, 4 November 2022 (UTC)
I edited Comfort object. Here is the diff for my edit. I added more common objects for comfort, such as the crib cards or "cheat sheet," commonly used during student exams, and I think we have all been using them during our academic careers. I have learned how to edit and cite my edit using Wikipedia, and I also realized that we have to be more careful if we want to use some of the information in Wikipedia. Olivia0831 ( talk) 06:54, 30 October 2022 (UTC)
I edited the Livestreaming this week. Add the now situation about Twitch platform, here is the diff. During this week, I know about livestreaming improvement in the world. Luciuszlt ( talk) 20:24, 5 November 2022 (UTC)
For Week 3, I edited the Gap year article. Here is the link to the diff, I feel a bit more comfortable with editing. In the second week, I reviewed the lecture recordings on how to properly edit and cite but this week I did not do that and just remembered what I did last week so it was a smoother process.
In the Gap year article, I added another motivation for students taking a gap year and I split the Description section into 2 paragraphs because I noticed the top part of the paragraph focused more on the reasons students take a gap year while the bottom part of the section discussed what happens during a gap year and the effects on students who take a gap year. -- Janyu150 ( talk) 20:41, 5 November 2022 (UTC)
I added a paragraph explaining why there were more female victims than men at the Seoul Halloween stampede. I think it is important to point out this fact as female victims are twice as much as men. Here is the diff: https://en.wikipedia.org/?title=Seoul_Halloween_crowd_crush&diff=next&oldid=1120222237 Cw3956 ( talk) 22:35, 5 November 2022 (UTC)
This week, I edited the article ByteDance. The diff is here. I found this article from Wikipedia articles in need of updating from October 2022. The list shows the articles needing help. You can go to Community Portal>Update with new information>More>Subcategories. Hope it find you well and help you choose the article. JayHTCVPN ( talk) 07:12, 5 November 2022 (UTC)
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I edited the Coffee this week. I added information in the Roast characteristics section about how the degree of roasting affects the brew color of the coffee, and also added a citation. Here is the diff. After reading and searching academic papers on the degree of roasting of coffee, I learned that the degree of roasting of coffee has an effect on taste, color, flavor, aroma. Rheaxx666 ( talk) 20:04, 5 November 2022 (UTC)
I edited Augmented reality page by adding application examples of AR in the "Urban design and planning" part, because the information in the original version was limited in this part. Here is the diff. Omnicass ( talk) 00:30, 6 November 2022 (UTC)
I edited the article on Plastic pollution. The diff for my edit is here [2]. I added more issue about the effects of plastic pollution on the environment. I learned more about how plastic pollution will effects of the world. And looking forward to learn more about environmental knowledge. Sssara7 ( talk) 01:51, 6 November 2022 (UTC)
I edited the article Screen reader with the following dif. I found that claims that are obvious to those of us who work with assistive technologies every day are not obvious to the public. Finding a peer-reviewed article was a bit harder, and underscored that perhaps I should consider adding literature on this subject. The one possible issue with my contribution is the additional reference to a manual of one of the screen readers, which may not be considered a good enough source. However, it perfectly illustrates in detail what the section is attempting to convey. Cabanehippopotamus ( talk) 02:22, 6 November 2022 (UTC)
The ariticle I add the citation is about the One-child policy. I add the part of detail about the reason leads to the gender inequality in China. Here is the Diff. [1] Throughout the citation again, I think I am getting better in adding a citation to the article. I hope the work could provide more information and better understanding to the reader. Riven3388 ( talk) 00:36, 9 November 2022 (UTC)
The article I edited is Organizational culture. I add another type of organizational culture called risk-aware culture, which is the current topic I studied from my other class. I did not find relative information in the article, so I add a brief introduction and use my textbook as citation resource to elaborate on that. I was surprised to see there's lack of information as risk management is so important nowadays.
the diff: https://en.wikipedia.org/?title=Organizational_culture&type=revision&diff=1121002462&oldid=1119260864 Jessssy ( talk) 01:11, 10 November 2022 (UTC)
I edit the article Video game livestreaming this week, the diff in my change is here. This is the third time I've edited Wikipedia, and in the process, I've found it easier to spot gaps between articles. Jaynean ( talk) 04:06, 10 November 2022 (UTC)
I edited the drought this week. I added a point about land degradation in the environmental consequences section. Here is the diff [4]. The point I added is one of the results of drought which can make the section more detailed and comprehensive. Through three weeks of practice, I became more and more familiar with how to add gap information to Wikipedia. VenusL ( talk) 10:39, 10 November 2022 (UTC)
I edited the Electric Truck this week by adding one more section under electric truck contribution. Previously this Contribution section only contains 2 aspects: electric truck in California and electric truck in South Korea. I added one section briefly talking about the electric truck in China. diff is here. Xj416 ( talk) 13:48, 10 November 2022 (UTC)
I edited Chinese tea this week and I added some information about tea therapy. Here is the diff. After this editing, I know that in order to change the article, you have to have proof. I can't edit Wikipedia until I find strong evidence in the database. XingboGao ( talk) 19:44, 10 November 2022 (UTC)
This week I edited Meta Platforms. I added more details about Meta's most recent massive layoffs. Please find the diff here: https://en.wikipedia.org/?title=Meta_Platforms&type=revision&diff=1121204587&oldid=1121038181 Cw3956 ( talk) 01:55, 11 November 2022 (UTC)
I have added more details with a citation about Electric car charging methods. I concluded the method to actually realize the wireless charging for electrical cars. Here is the diff. After I have finished adding and updating the section, I believe I have helped the readers to further understands the real process of wireless charging. MichaelNhy ( talk) 01:16, 12 November 2022 (UTC)
I edited Talk Show. Here is the diff. There is lot of new Chinese shows nowadays, and there is no section talking about Chinese talk show in Wiki page, so I would like to add on more information about it. Olivia0831 ( talk) 05:12, 6 November 2022 (UTC)
I edit Talk show this week, add more information about Chinese Talk Show. Here is the diff. I have learned that I need to avoid copyright issue, from my cited article. Olivia0831 ( talk) 02:02, 13 November 2022 (UTC)
I edited the Employee benefits. Here is the link to the diff. In this article, I learn some benefits for employees in the UK and add some US employees benefits. Rt2510 ( talk) 21:56, 5 November 2022 (UTC)
I edited Sustainable fashion. Here is the diff. This topic is related to the research I am working on. I am glad that I can add some information to the wiki page. StellaJiang333 ( talk) 03:18, 6 November 2022 (UTC)