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Jimfbleak -
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13:26, 9 June 2024 (UTC)
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Hi, I have restored this Draft to
User:Benjamin_Karaoglan/sandbox. I hope that is of use to you, but please note and digest the contents of the important message above. Best wishes --
Cactus.man
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09:57, 10 June 2024 (UTC)
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You have an obvious
conflict of interest, please don't
write about yourself, your friends or relatives and read the guidance below:
- When you write about a person, you must provide
independent verifiable sources to enable us to verify the facts and show that they meet the
notability guidelines. Sources that are not acceptable include those linked to the person or an associated organisation, press releases, YouTube, IMDB, social media and other sites that can be self-edited, blogs, websites of unknown or non-reliable provenance, and sites that are just reporting what the person claims or interviewing them. Note that references should be in-line so we can tell what fact each is supporting, and should not be bare urls.
- Your only sources were an interview with her and an entry in Theatre.com, which can be self-edited and is a sales site.
- You must write in a
non-promotional tone. Articles must be neutral and encyclopaedic, with verifiable facts, not opinions or reviews.
- Better, but avoid "dedicated", "numerous".
- There shouldn't be any url links in the article, only in the "References" or "External links" sections.
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- This is en-wiki, wikilink to the English Wikipedia, not the French, so
Hamlet,
Garcia Lorca etc
Before attempting to write an article again, please make sure that the topic meets the notability criteria linked above, and check that you can find
independent third party sources. Also read
Your first article. If you are writing about
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Jimfbleak -
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15:28, 10 June 2024 (UTC)
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- If you have a financial relationship, eg as her manager or agent, complete {{paid|user=Benjamin Karaoglan|client= Edith Vernes}} as you see it here, and save it at
User:Benjamin Karaoglan. If she is a friend or colleague, put {{Connected contributor|User1= Benjamin Karaoglan}} on the article's talk page
Jimfbleak -
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15:50, 10 June 2024 (UTC)
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- Thank you for your valuable help and guidance. I have update the COI both on the article's talk page and on my User Profile. I don't know if you have access to my Draft:Edith Vernes, but if so, do you believe it's neutral enough ? --
Benjamin Karaoglan (
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16:11, 10 June 2024 (UTC)
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- Thanks for the email. If you look at the start of this section, most of my text is actually preliminary comments on the draft. As it stands, it has no chance of being accepted for the reasons I've stated, essentially that your text is entirely lacking in proper references, and although you have given wikilinks, they should be to en-wiki articles, not fr-wiki
Jimfbleak -
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10:50, 11 June 2024 (UTC)
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- Thank you for your answer. I have now matched fr wikilinks to their corresponding e-wikilinks. However, for some cases, their only exists fr articles. For now I have left them, but I was wondering if wikipedia guidelines indicated to remove all non en-articles even if the en equivalent doesn't exist ? Equally, I've came up with more references, but I was under the impression reading your point on the Sources that they weren't considered as reliable by Wikipedia. What's your take on this aspect of the article ?
Benjamin Karaoglan (
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12:13, 11 June 2024 (UTC)
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- I will see your messages here if you start them with
User:Jimfbleak and sign them in the same edit.
- There are links like
Théâtre du Palais-Royal,
William Shakespeare you could add, not sure about the French links where the en-wiki doesn't exist, leave for now. YouTube is not acceptable, and reviewers using the script will see it coloured red.
- Her notability, if any, will be clearer if you indicate the roles she has played in the theatre and cinema. Acting
Ophelia in a professional production may be notable, playing a servant probably isn't. She doesn't seem tom have had a major role in Hamlet?
- At some stage you will have to submit this for review, which may help since I don't know enough about your acting refs to access their quality
Jimfbleak -
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15:23, 11 June 2024 (UTC)
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User:Jimfbleak Ok, duly noted. Thank you again for all your valuable help and guidance.
Benjamin Karaoglan (
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15:44, 11 June 2024 (UTC)
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