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The result was: promoted by
Orlady (
talk) 02:26, 22 July 2014 (UTC)
... that the practice of royal intermarriage was most prevalent in Europe from the medieval era until the outbreak of
World War I?
Reviewed: Not a self-nomination
Improved to Good Article status by
Sotakeit (
talk). Nominated by
Oceanh (
talk) at 23:15, 30 June 2014 (UTC).
I am sure many (lest I say most) do know that. Could you suggest a "hookier" hook?
Surtsicna (
talk) 23:39, 30 June 2014 (UTC)
I agree with
Surtsicna. Perhaps something like ALT1:...that evidence of royal intermarriage can be found as far back as the Late Bronze Age?
Sotakeit (
talk) 08:06, 1 July 2014 (UTC)
Or ALT2:... that the
Habsburgs adhered to the policy of royal intermarriage so much that they made it their motto, but later came to suffer from consequences of severe
inbreeding? People are intrigued by incest. Just ask HBO.
Surtsicna (
talk) 09:11, 1 July 2014 (UTC)
Thank you for comments and for providing alternative hooks. I labeled and slightly reformatted the alt hooks. Regarding the original hook, I am not convinced that this is common knowledge to everybody (to experts though, yes obviously).
Oceanh (
talk) 00:27, 2 July 2014 (UTC)
This newly promoted GA is long enough and nominated within the correct timeframe. Any of the suggested hooks could be used as the facts have inline citations. I detected no policy issues.
Cwmhiraeth (
talk) 09:14, 20 July 2014 (UTC)
Pulled ALT2 from prep because the source
[1] doesn't say the motto means that royals must marry royals, only that marriage is a better way of expanding territory/influence than is war.
EEng (
talk) 01:39, 22 July 2014 (UTC)
Adding the symbol so this won't appear to be ready to move to prep. --
Orlady (
talk) 02:06, 22 July 2014 (UTC)
I'm restoring this to the prep area, with minor rewording to eliminate the statement about the motto. --
Orlady (
talk) 02:25, 22 July 2014 (UTC)