The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as
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The result was: promoted by
Bruxton (
talk) 16:07, 17 May 2023 (UTC)
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Shadow of the Starlit Sky:, I'm sorry but I do not believe that this can be promoted as it has not been created, expanded 5x, or made into a GA in the past 7 days of its nomination. Sorry.
Onegreatjoke (
talk) 21:42, 7 May 2023 (UTC)
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Onegreatjoke: The article has been moved into mainspace on 19 April, therefore is eligible.
BorgQueen (
talk) 22:21, 7 May 2023 (UTC)
Other problems: - Could probably do with another hook
QPQ: None required.
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Shadow of the Starlit Sky: Very sorry for the screw-up. Anyway, most of the article is fine. I'd honestly like a hook that mentions how the game was a school project. However, the wording of the article can feel too promotional/advertising-esque which i feel should be reworded slightly.
Onegreatjoke (
talk) 17:46, 8 May 2023 (UTC)
No problem. I can rephrase the article to get rid of the promotional tone and reword the hook or find another one as needed. Specifically, in which sections can I get rid of the promotional tone? I myself am opposed to UPE/promotional material in articles and would work happily to get rid of it. --
Shadowof theStarlit Sky 18:06, 8 May 2023 (UTC)
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Onegreatjoke:@
BorgQueen: Sorry, didn't see this for a while - I'm on a Wikibreak and less than active than usual and only noticed this today (I locked myself out of my main acc with Wikibreak Enforcer so I'm typing this on my alt.) You said the hook might need changing, so what do you think of this?
ALT 2: "Did you know.... that
Prodigy Math Game was initially created by co-CEOs Alex Peters and Rohan Mahimker as a school project? [1]"
Or, alternatively, which one of my other two hooks would be better? Please let me know. --
Shadowof theStarlit Sock 01:37, 15 May 2023 (UTC)