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The result was: promoted by
Alex ShihTalk 03:55, 23 July 2017 (UTC)
ALT3:... that Margaret Ivy after graduating with degrees in French and Spanish, spent a significant part of her working life in teaching and practicing
mass communications?
Created by
Crosstemplejay (
talk). Self-nominated at 13:28, 20 June 2017 (UTC).
New enough, long enough, within policy to a reasonable degree, copyvio unlikely, but could there be a more interesting hook or at least a second alternative hook? QBQ not done either.
YEPacificHurricane 15:31, 13 July 2017 (UTC)
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Yoninah: *Changes made, more hooks suggested. Please review and offer your comment. Thanks.
CrossTemple Jay 14:12, 16 July 2017 (UTC)
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Crosstemplejay: It's very hard to come up with a hook for a politician article when all you're writing about is their education and appointments. It's best to find some colorful biographical facts to add to the article so you can use those for a hook. ALT2 is coming close to a hook, but the part about each administration being in the New Patriotic Party doesn't appear in the article. If you would add and source that, we could use ALT2. We could also go with your original hook, although I would reverse the order: