The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as
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The result was: promoted by
Bruxton (
talk) 15:12, 20 June 2023 (UTC)
Overall: @
Orchastrattor: Good article. Though, i feel like the hook is too long. It's nearly over 200 characters and so, if you can find a way to shorten the hook a bit i'd appreciate it.
Onegreatjoke (
talk) 02:36, 10 June 2023 (UTC)
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Onegreatjoke: Done
Orchastrattor (
talk) 02:54, 10 June 2023 (UTC)
It is easier for promotors when the hook is represented and easy to find in the body of our article. Our hook hear uses different language and requires the reader to ferret out the details. I was able to piece it together so I hope that the queue promotor can do so as well.
Bruxton (
talk) 15:08, 20 June 2023 (UTC)
Note: The 93% Earwig score is as a result of copy paste from Wikipedia.
Bruxton (
talk) 15:12, 20 June 2023 (UTC)