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Rosiestep (
talk). Self nom at 23:20, 23 October 2011 (UTC)
Offline citation AGF, although I did wonder whether the hook was slightly inaccurate based on the article - from the article, I gathered that Kempe's windows are just in the chancel? Bobtalk 08:54, 29 October 2011 (UTC)
Article review for Church of the Holy Trinity, Embleton
A west window commemorates the 1952 Coronation of Elizabeth II, while a north wall window by is dedicated to a Merton College vicar.
Wording is taken directly from the source, and it should not be difficult to rephrase this in our own words.
SandyGeorgia (
Talk) 16:48, 4 November 2011 (UTC)
Should be fixed now, but I'm not sure "committed" would be the best word to replace the north wall's window. HurricaneFan25 17:16, 4 November 2011 (UTC)
"Committed" clearly isn't the right word, so I've fixed your fix. But here's what really gets me: the article is full of rubbish like "features windows containing with excellent specimens of stained glass". Do reviewers not actually read the article?
MalleusFatuorum 17:36, 4 November 2011 (UTC)
I suspect that, like some of the other prose errors seen, that could be an artefact of cut-and-paste editing that missed.
SandyGeorgia (
Talk) 18:18, 4 November 2011 (UTC)