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VR(Please
ping on reply) 03:55, 18 May 2024 (UTC).
The notability of the article is questionable. If the proposal is not implemented and is replaced by another proposal (which seems to be the case at the moment) do you think anyone will be remotely interested in this article a year from now?
Vegan416 (
talk) 14:04, 29 May 2024 (UTC)
I do think itâs a significant proposal that will continue to be mentioned years from now. For example, consider the
Palestinian proposal at Camp David, which was eventually replaced by
an Israeli proposal. Initial media coverage was mainly focused on the Israeli proposal, but as the years passed by academic literature began to pick up on the Palestinian proposal and we can see evidence of
WP:SIGCOV in 2003, 2006, 2007, 2012, 2017 etc.VR(Please
ping on reply) 04:13, 31 May 2024 (UTC)
Issue with all 3 hooks: lack sufficient clarity that Israel did not agree (both before and after). Do you have an alternative suggestion?
FortunateSons (
talk) 06:54, 1 June 2024 (UTC)
ALT3: ... on May 31, Joe Biden presented a three-phase ceasefire proposal that was welcomed by
Hamas but opposed by some members of the Israeli cabinet? Source:
[6][7]
Vice regent This is definitely better, but I would like an uninvolved person to evaluate it. Thank you :)
FortunateSons (
talk) 16:13, 3 June 2024 (UTC)
Issue with hook 2 (and maybe hook 3 as well): The claim may be factually incorrect or misleading. Another
reliable source claims that Hamas is not ready to give up its weapons: ""Hamas will not surrender its guns or sign a proposal that asks for that,â Arab mediators said Hamas leader Yahya Sinwar told them in a brief message they received Thursday, as two top U.S. officials, including Central Intelligence Agency Director William Burns, hold talks in the region aimed at jump-starting long-stalled negotiations."
Vegan416 (
talk) 18:38, 6 June 2024 (UTC)
But the proposal is not asking for Hamas to give up its guns? In any case, joining two reliably sourced statements to come to a conclusion is
WP:SYNTH. Do you have any reliable sources that directly state that Hamas has rejected this proposal? VR(Please
ping on reply) 04:08, 10 June 2024 (UTC)
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Launchballer: this hook should be pretty uncontroversial and should not need any attribution.VR(Please
ping on reply) 13:58, 28 June 2024 (UTC)
This is in the first bit of 'Proposals' and is a summary of that section's three subsections. Fine by me, an actual reviewer can adjudicate. Full review needed.--Launchballer 14:02, 28 June 2024 (UTC)