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The result was: promoted by
Cwmhiraeth (
talk) 08:25, 27 March 2016 (UTC)
The article was promoted to GA on 14 March. No problems with copyvio/plagiarism as these are covered by GA process. Ref [16] does not support the claim, but refs [25][26] at the end of the paragraph do. I know that the DYK regulars are pretty hot on this sort of thing nowadays hence the question mark.
The NTSB report that references ALT 1 supports the fact, so no problem with using ALT 1.
Mjroots (
talk) 20:45, 16 March 2016 (UTC)
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Mjroots: since close paraphrasing has been found in GA articles too, it's important to also check for it in DYK nominations. I've done a close paraphrasing check and removed one minor incidence of close paraphrasing.
Yoninah (
talk) 18:07, 26 March 2016 (UTC)
I've trimmed "male" from the hook, as it adds nothing remarkable.
Edwardx (
talk) 00:07, 17 March 2016 (UTC)
I don't see how ALT1 is hooky at all. The first hook is definitely hooky. If the sourcing isn't good, perhaps the nominator could suggest a different hook?
Yoninah (
talk) 22:10, 24 March 2016 (UTC)