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The result was: promoted by Allen3talk 10:33, 27 October 2011 (UTC)
Sungkar was basically onset to ensure she did not get jealous; the one scene the sources emphasize that she was keeping an eye on the two is when Septriasa and Irwansyah kissed. Sungkar was not part of the production crew.
Crisco 1492 (
talk) 13:44, 17 October 2011 (UTC)
Then what about the hook ALT1 "... that former couple Acha Septriasa and Irwansyah were reunited for the film Love Story , which is directed by Hanny Saputra, under the close supervision of Irwansyah's future wife?"? The rest should be okay, though I think some articles are a little short.--
Lionratz (
talk) 12:14, 18 October 2011 (UTC)
Regarding article lengths, Septriasa and the movie are clearly over the minimum. Saputra is at 1800, so not too bad. I felt pretty bad about Sungkar's article peaking out at 1562, but I was driven partially insane by the plethora of sources for trivia about her wedding (how many invitations, what their parents said, etc.) so I wanted to get it over with really quickly. For the hook, how about ALT2 ... that former couple Acha Septriasa and Irwansyah were reunited for Love Story, under the direction of Hanny Saputra, and kissed under the close supervision of Irwansyah's future wife?
Crisco 1492 (
talk) 12:51, 18 October 2011 (UTC)
, AGF on foreign language sources. The new hook sounds okay.--
Lionratz (
talk) 05:15, 20 October 2011 (UTC)