The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as
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JJonahJackalope: It's been a month since the above review and there's been no response. Are you still planning on continuing this nomination? I agree with the reviewer that the hook isn't great and the nomination needs a new one.
Narutolovehinata5 (
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Going to wait for OGJ's opinion. It's not an amazing hook but I think it's better than the original.
Narutolovehinata5 (
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It's definitely a much better hook.
Onegreatjoke (
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